One direction or another, "time" only tells that your heart beat is still going, and life continues.
brokenreality - 2008-04-22
I read both of the peices you have submitted on here, and you're writing seems very open and personal. I think thats really awesome, and I like it a lot :) oh and I really like the line "So with this multitude of words and motions..." It just sounds really cool, and is a good transition to the rest of the poem.
TabulaRasa - 2008-04-29