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and here i am again on this marygoround
fell so hard so fast and crashed head first on the ground
i didnt know it was coming, there was no warning no sound
but i should have known there was no way that this boy could be found
this perfect guy ive dreamed of all of these years
the one to kiss me on the forehead, wash away all my fears
it ended up he was the guy to fucking leave me in tears
and now i dont know what to do but hope the smoke finally clears

it went from zero to 80 and it went by in a flash
i mean you caught me off guard and i bat you a lash
but you still loved her and i got a bruise and a gash
but it could have been worse, i survived this car crash
and the smoke its all clearing, my visions back once again
but im sure ill think about this and about what could have been
but it was something short lived and now it flows through this pen
and like the words to a prayer, i bid this final amen
Posted in Poetry
by Necrophile23
2012-02-05

Comments

I wasn't sure about the first stanza, but the second one had a really good flow to it and finished off strong.

TabulaRasa - 2012-03-23

been there, i think we all have at least once in our lives.

Elicia - 2012-07-28

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